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18 March 2021

EU Directive on Security of Network and Information Systems (NIS 2 Directive)

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FINAL VERSION SUBMITTED (IF RATIFIED)

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FINAL DRAFT VERSION TO BE VOTED UPON BY THE ALAC

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Posted by Alan Greenberg. Monday, 15 March 2021 04:28 UTC


Comment to be posted

This comment is being submitted on behalf of the ICANN’s At-Large Advisory Committee (ALAC). The ALAC is responsible for representing the interests of individual Internet users within ICANN.

As currently written, there are a number of gaps that will not allow NIS2, and particularly Article 23, to fulfill its intended function.

The key issue is that NIS2 focuses on TLD registries but for most gTLD registrations, the registration data is not collected or stored by registries, but rather by registrars, resellers and privacy/proxy providers (P/P-P).

  • For most registrations, the registration data is not held by the registry, but by the registrar.
  • Many registrars have “resellers” and it is these resellers that interact with the registrant.
  • Resellers may themselves have resellers. These 2nd-order resellers have no direct link to or contract with the registrar and in fact, the registrar may not even be aware of them. There is no limit to the depth of this reseller chain.
  • Some or all of the registration data may never be stored by (or even presented to) the registrar. It will be held by a privacy or proxy provider. A proxy provider will not pass on either the name of the real registrant or their contact information. A privacy provider protects only the contact data. A P/P-P may be an affiliate of the registrar or reseller, or a completely separate entity.
  • For a P/P registration made through a reseller only the reseller or the P/P-P can verify the accuracy of the registration data.

In short, focusing primarily on TLD registries will miss the bigger picture. Moreover, not explicitly referencing the other participants may allow them to be excluded from future ICANN policy and Member State legislation.

To remedy this:

  • Registrars must be explicitly defined in Article 4.
  • Resellers and P/P-P must be included in Article 4, either as separate definitions or explicitly integrated into the definition of registrar.
  • Article 2 on Scope must ensure that registrars, resellers and P/P-P are subject to NIS2, regardless of size, just as it does for registries.
  • Registrars, resellers and P/P-P must be classified as essential or important services in Annexed I and II. It is these entities that collect, store, publish and release registration data in almost all cases. They must be subject to the supervision and penalties described in Articles 28-34. If there are not clear and dissuasive penalties for all players in the registration process, then Article 23 becomes meaningless [the fact that some registrars may run DNS servers and thus be considered essential is not sufficient].

Other Issues

Undue Delay: Article sections 23.4 and 23.5 make reference to “without undue delay”. Although the ALAC understands the EC desire that NIS2 remain high level and leave specificity to the Member States, the potential for misinterpretation here is too great. As an example, the draft ICANN policy for an URGENT request (imminent threat to human life or critical infrastructure) allows of up to 3 calendar days in some cases.  Other requests allow a mean (not maximum) response time of up to 10 business days (2-3 weeks).

Publication: Article 23.4 calls for the publication of specific registration data. The form of publication must be specified, presumably via publicly accessible Internet access and without charge.

Accuracy: Article 23 calls for the collection and maintenance of accurate and complete registration data usable to identify and contact the domain name holder. Since privacy advocates and registrars believe that the data subject is the sole judge of “accuracy”. A clear requirement that these data items must be verified as accurate should be included.

Summary

The ALAC appreciates the NIS2 initiative in regard to ICANN-related services and thanks the European Commission for this opportunity to submit comments. NIS2, with appropriate enhancements as described here, has the potential to greatly improve Internet security and the ALAC looks forward to its adoption.


Full comment to be attached

ALAC Comment on NIS2 to be submitted to the European Commission

DRAFT 14 March 2021

[This is a more complete and readable version of the formal 4000 character submitted comment.]

This comment is being submitted on behalf of the At-Large Advisory Committee (ALAC) of the Internet Corporation for Assigned Name and Numbers (ICANN).

The ALAC is responsible for representing the interests of individual Internet users within ICANN. As such the ALAC and the At-Large Community which it represents has a great interest in ensuring that individual Internet users can go about their online activities with safety and security.

As such, the European Commission’s Proposal for a revised Directive on Security of Network and Information Systems (NIS2) is of great interest to the ALAC and the ALAC strongly supports this initiative. NIS2 has the potential for significantly improving individual Internet user’s ability to use the Internet free of the threats that now confront them regularly. NIS2 will help address the increasing illegal activities including fraud, phishing, cyber-attack and malware. As stated in NIS2 recital 15, “Upholding and preserving a reliable, resilient and secure domain name system (DNS) is a key factor in maintaining the integrity of the Internet and is essential for its continuous and stable operation, on which the digital economy and society depend.”

However, it is the view of the ALAC that as the proposal is currently written, there are a number of gaps that will not allow it to fulfil its intended function. The ALAC is specifically concerned that Article 23 on Databases of domain names and registration data and related sections need a number of refinements to ensure that it meets its intended goals.

For the generic TLD (gTLD) overseen by ICANN, the “registration data” is collected and generally held not by registries but by what Article 23 refers to as “entities providing domain name registration services” and what recital 61 parenthetically refers to as “so-called registrars”. To ensure that Article 23 has its desired effect, it is necessary to ensure that all of the entities involved in providing domain name registration services are clearly and unambiguously cited in NIS2. Moreover, it is important that their responsibilities are similarly clearly and unambiguously stated.

Within the gTLD space, registrars are the prime entities that offer domain registration services, but they are not the only such entities:

  • For .com and other TLDs, and due to recent ICANN policy, potentially for many other TLDs, the registration data is not held by the registry, but by the registrar. This comprises the vast majority of all gTLD registrations.
  • Many registrars have “resellers” and it is these resellers that interact with the registrant.
  • Moreover, resellers may themselves have resellers. These 2nd-order resellers have no direct link to or contract with the registrar and in fact, the registrar may not even be aware of them. There is no limit to the depth of this reseller chain.
  • Some or all of the registration data may never be stored by (or even presented to) the registrar. It will be held by a privacy or proxy provider. A privacy provider will allow the name of the real registrant to be stored in the domain registration data, but not any contact information. A proxy provider will not pass on either the name of the real registrant or their contact information. A privacy/proxy (P/P) provider may be an affiliate of the registrar or reseller, or a completely separate entity.
  • For a P/P registration made through a reseller only the reseller or the P/P provider can verify the accuracy of the registration data.

The following comments are based on the public NIS2 documents issued by the Commission as well as the 26 February 2021 Briefing where EC representatives presented an overview of NIS2 to the ICANN community.

Article 2: Scope

Article 2 ensures that all TLD registries, regardless of size, are subject to NIS2. However, Article 2 makes no reference to registrars, resellers or P/P providers, many of who satisfy the Commission definition of micro or small enterprises (fewer than 50 persons and annual turnover of less that EUR 10 million)

It is essential that NIS2 explicitly covers all of the players in the domain registration process.

Article 4: Definitions

It is critical that all of the known players in the domain registration process be identified and defined. This clearly includes registrars but should also reference resellers and P/P providers, either as separate definitions or explicitly within the registrar definition.

It is understood that this list may not be exhaustive, but it is essential to identify those who are known to play significant roles.

Article 23: Databases of domain names and registration data

Accuracy: Section 1 calls for the collection and maintenance of accurate and complete registration data. Section 2 ensures that the Section 1 data be usable to identify and contact the domain name holder. This clarity is appreciated. Nevertheless, there is a persistent belief among some privacy advocates and registrars that the data subject is the sole judge of “accuracy” and that if the data subject is satisfied with its contact information, no further efforts need to be taken. Since it is known that some domain name registrants do not wish to be contacted, this can result in an untenable situation.

Anything that can be done to ensure that true identification and contactability is the required goal, the more likely that this directive can be followed. Specifically, that it is the obligation of the registrar or their agents to verify accuracy and contactability.

Penalties: It is unclear to what extent penalties apply to infractions of Article 23. During the Briefing, the question was asked but the only definitive answer offered was that they were not subject to specified maximums. This is linked to the status of entities listed in Annexes I and II on Essential and Important Entities. If there are not clear and dissuasive penalties, then Article 23 becomes meaningless.

Non-personal Data: Section 4 requires that all registration data that is not personal data must be published without undue delay. Registrars have expressed concern that they have no way to ensure that contact details are not in fact those of a natural person and therefore will not risk publication. This issue must be addressed.

Applicability to registrars and associated entities: The documents mention registrars and during the Briefing, it was stated that the intent was to include such entities as resellers and P/P providers. However, if it is not explicit, there is no guarantee that such entities will be included in national laws nor in ICANN policies that are developed based on NIS2. See also comments on Annexes I and II.

Undue delay: Article sections 23.4 and 23.5 make reference to “without undue delay”. Although the ALAC understands the EC desire that NIS2 remain high level and leave specificity to the Member States, the potential for misinterpretation here is too great. As an example, in the draft ICANN policy for release of information (as described in Article 23.5), for a URGENT request (those involving imminent threat to human life, critical infrastructure or child exploitation), the typical response allowed is 1 business day (limited to 3 calendar days). Other types of request allow for a mean (not maximum) response time of up to 10 business days (between 2 and 3 weeks).

Publication: Article 23.4 calls for the publication of specific registration data. The form of publication must be specified, presumably via publicly accessible Internet access and without charge.

Chapter VI: Supervision and Enforcement

Registries are classified as Essential entities and are therefore subject to the appropriate terms of Articles 28-34. Because the enterprises responsible for the registration of domain names are not so listed, these critical regulations do not cover them.

Annex I/II: Essential/Important Entities

Registrars, resellers and Privacy/Proxy providers must be included as either essential or important services. If they are not, they are not subject to regulations such as those described under Articles 29 and 30 on supervision. In the opinion of the ALAC, these enterprises should be classed as essential entities just as TLD registries are. It is the registrars, resellers and P/P providers that collect all of the data and are responsible for storing and releasing it in almost all cases.

During the Briefing, it was stated that since many registrars run authoritative DNS servers, they were implicitly covered. The ALAC notes that running such a server is a convenience to its customers and is by no means a requirement for a registrar. Moreover, that service could be outsourced and it does not apply to resellers nor P/P providers. Accordingly, this is no substitute for explicitly identifying these entities as being critical in their own right.

Summary

The ALAC appreciates the NIS2 initiative in regard to ICANN-related services and specifically thanks the European Commission for this opportunity to submit comments. NIS2, with appropriate enhancements as described in this comment, has the potential to greatly improve Internet security and the ALAC looks forward to its being adopted by the European Parliament and acted on by the Member States.




DRAFT SUBMITTED FOR DISCUSSION

The first draft submitted will be placed here before the call for comments begins. The Draft should be preceded by the name of the person submitting the draft and the date/time. If, during the discussion, the draft is revised, the older version(S) should be left in place and the new version along with a header line identifying the drafter and date/time should be placed above the older version(s), separated by a Horizontal Rule (available + Insert More Content control).

ALAC Comment on NIS2 to be submitted to the European Commission

DRAFT 10 March 2021

This comment is being submitted on behalf of the At-Large Advisory Committee (ALAC) of the Internet Corporation for Assigned Name and Numbers (ICANN).

The ALAC is responsible for representing the interests of individual Internet users within ICANN. As such the ALAC and the At-Large Community which it represents has a great interest in ensuring that individual Internet users can go about their online activities with safety and security.

As such, the European Commission’s Proposal for a revised Directive on Security of Network and Information Systems (NIS2) is of great interest to the ALAC and the ALAC strongly supports this initiative. NIS2 has the potential for significantly improving individual Internet user’s ability to use the Internet free of the threats that now confront them regularly. NIS2 will help address the increasing illegal activities including fraud, phishing, cyber-attack and malware. As stated in NIS2 recital 15, “Upholding and preserving a reliable, resilient and secure domain name system (DNS) is a key factor in maintaining the integrity of the Internet and is essential for its continuous and stable operation, on which the digital economy and society depend.”

However, the it is the view of the ALAC that as the proposal is currently written, there are a number of gaps that will not allow it to fulfil its intended function. The ALAC is specifically concerned that Article 23 on Databases of domain names and registration data and related sections need a number of refinements to ensure that it meets its intended goals.

For the generic TLD (gTLD) overseen by ICANN, the “registration data” is collected and generally held not by registries but by what Article 23 refers to as “entities providing domain name registration services” and what recital 61 parenthetically refers to as “so-called registrars”. To ensure that Article 23 has its desired effect, it is necessary to ensure that all of the entities involved in providing domain name registration services are clearly and unambiguously cited in NIS2. Moreover, it is important that their responsibilities are similarly clearly and unambiguously stated.

Within the gTLD space, registrars are the prime entities that offer domain registration services, but they are not the only such entities:

  • For .com and other TLDs, and due to recent ICANN policy, potentially for many other TLDs, the registration data is not held by the registry, but by the registrar. This comprises the vast majority of all gTLD registration.
  • Many registrars have “resellers” and it is these resellers that interact with the registrant.
  • Moreover, resellers may themselves have resellers. These 2nd-order resellers have no direct link to or contract with the registrar and in fact, the registrar may not even be aware of them. There is no limit to the depth of this reseller chain.
  • Some or all of the registration data may never be stored by (or even presented to) the registrar. It will be held by a privacy or proxy provider. A privacy provider will allow the name of the real registrant to be stored in the domain registration data, but not any contact information. A proxy provider will not pass on either the name of the real registrant nor their contact information. A privacy/proxy (P/P) provider may be an affiliate of the registrar or reseller, or a completely separate entity.
  • For a P/P registration made through a reseller only the reseller or the P/P provider can verify the accuracy of the registration data.

The following comments are based on the public NIS2 documents issues by the Commission as well as the 26 March 2021 Briefing where EC representatives presented and overview of NIS2 to the ICANN community.

Article 2: Scope

Article 2 ensures that all TLD registries, regardless of size, are subject to NIS2. However, Article 2 makes no reference to registrars, resellers or P/P providers, many of who satisfy the Commission definition of micro or small enterprises (fewer than 50 persons and annual turnover of less that EUR 10 million)

It is essential that NIS2 explicitly covers all of the players in the domain registration process.

Article 4: Definitions

It is critical that all of the known players in the domain registration process be identified and defined. This clearly includes registrars but should also reference resellers and P/P providers, either as separate definitions or explicitly within the registrar definition.

It is understood that this list may not be exhaustive, but it is essential to identify those who are known to play significant roles.

Article 23: Databases of domain names and registration data

Accuracy: Section 1 calls for the collection and maintenance of accurate and complete registration data. Section 2 ensures that the Section 1 data be usable to identify and contact the domain name holder. This clarity is appreciated. Nevertheless, there is a persistent belief among some privacy advocates and registrars that the data subject is the sole judge of “accuracy” and that if the data subject is satisfied with its contact information, no further efforts need to be taken. Since it is known that some domain name registrants do not wish to be contacted, this can result in an untenable situation.

Anything that can be done to ensure that true identification and contactability is the required goal, the more likely that this directive can be followed. Specifically, that it is the obligation of the registrar or their agents to verify accuracy and contactability.

Penalties: It is unclear to what extent penalties apply to infractions of Article 23. During the Briefing, the question was asked but the only definitive answer was that they were not subject to specified maximums. This is linked to the status of entities listed in Annexes I and II on Essential and Important Entities. If there are not clear and dissuasive penalties, then Article 23 becomes meaningless.

Non-personal Data: Section 4 requires that all registration data that is not personal data must be published without undue delay. Registrars have expressed concern that they have no way to ensure that contact details are not in fact those of a natural person and therefore do will not risk publication. This issue must be addressed.

Applicability to registrars and associated entities: The documents mention registrars and during the Briefing, it was stated that the intent was to include such entities as resellers and P/P providers. However, if it is not explicit, there is no guarantee that such entities will be included in national laws nor in ICANN policies that are developed based on NIS2. See also comments on Annexes I and II.

Undue delay: Article 23.4 and 23.5 makes reference to “without undue delay”. Although the ALAC understand the EC desire that NIS2 remain high level and leave specificity to the Member States, the potential for misinterpretation here is too great. As an example, in the draft ICANN policy for release of information (as described in Article 23.5), for a URGENT request (those involving imminent threat to human life, critical infrastructure or child exploitation), the typical response allowed is 1 business day (limited to 3 calendar days). Other types of request allow for a mean (not maximum) response time of up to 10 calendar days (between 2 and 3 weeks).

Chapter VI: Supervision and Enforcement

Registries are classified as Essential entities and are therefore subject to the appropriate terms of Articles 28-34. Because the enterprises responsible for the registration of domain names are not so listed, these critical regulations do not cover them.

Annex I/II: Essential/Important Entities

Registrars, resellers and Privacy/Proxy providers must be included as either essential or important services. If they are not, they are not subject to regulations such as those described under Article 29 and 30 on supervision. In the opinion of the ALAC, these enterprises should be classes as essential entities just as TLD registries are. It is the registrars, resellers and P/P providers that collect all of the data and are responsible for storing and releasing it in almost all cases.

During the Briefing, it was stated that since many registrars run authoritative DNS servers, they were implicitly covered. The ALAC notes that running such a server is a convenience to its customers and is by no means a requirement for a registrar. Moreover, that service could be outsourced and it does not apply to resellers nor P/P providers. Accordingly, this is no substitute for explicitly identifying these entities as being critical in their own right.

Summary

The ALAC appreciates the NIS2 initiative in regard to ICANN-related services and specifically thanks the European Commission for this opportunity to submit comments. NIS2, with appropriate enhancements as described in this comment, has the potential to greatly improve Internet security and we look forward to its being adopted by the European Parliament and acted on by the Member States.

2 Comments

  1. Thank you, Alan.

    In your preamble you made clear, which information is available to whom:

    • Contract information down the reseller chain
    • Starting at the Registry (or IANA), which points to the registrar, which points to the reseller, (which points to the P/P), which points to the registrant

    This has some consequences for the NIS 2 framework:

    • The accuracy requirement can only be fulfilled for the direct known contract data, not for the registrant data
    • Registrant data SHOULD NOT stored outside of the last reseller in the chain (even a GDPR requirement), because it would break the accuracy requirement and would render P/P useless
    • The accessibility requirement (i.e. from LEAs) can only fulfilled by an automatic chain of database delegations pointing to the next database in the reseller chain
    • ICANN need to update their policies and registry/registrar contracts to ensure, that registrant data is available through this chain of databases (revealing the chain of contracts), hence add an requirement to the operation of a registrar or reseller (provide the database), and a monitoring scheme at ICANN to validate that the requirements are met
    • There is no requirement to store the data at each reseller locally, but the reseller needs to make a contract with somebody (i.e. the registrar), who operates the database on behave of the reseller

    I do not see those consequences in your text. What did I miss?

    1. This has some consequences for the NIS 2 framework:

      • The accuracy requirement can only be fulfilled for the direct known contract data, not for the registrant data

      NIS  (and ICANN contracts) require accurate data and NIS makes it clear that accuracy is for identification and contact. Exactly how this is assured is up to the Registrar. It is clear that if there is a P/P provider, only the P/P (or an affiliate) can ensure that accuracy.

      • Registrant data SHOULD NOT stored outside of the last reseller in the chain (even a GDPR requirement), because it would break the accuracy requirement and would render P/P useless

      Formal registrant data must be stored by the registrar (and registry in some cases). That is an ICANN requirement and is included in the EPDP policy. For P/P only the P/P has the data of what I call the beneficial registrant (the P/P provider is the registrant of record). Trans-border data flow is a potential issue and the registrar/registry need to address that.

      • The accessibility requirement (i.e. from LEAs) can only fulfilled by an automatic chain of database delegations pointing to the next database in the reseller chain

      That is not currently the way it works. I would be delighted if we actually knew what the reseller chain was, never mind its databases. But sadly that is not the world we now live in, and I sadly don't think we will get there any time soon.

      • ICANN need to update their policies and registry/registrar contracts to ensure, that registrant data is available through this chain of databases (revealing the chain of contracts), hence add an requirement to the operation of a registrar or reseller (provide the database), and a monitoring scheme at ICANN to validate that the requirements are met

      Largely agree. Good luck ensuring that it happens.

      I say largely because I do not believe that a chain of databases is sufficiently robust or trustworthy. And both are essential (as your last bullet point implies).

      • There is no requirement to store the data at each reseller locally, but the reseller needs to make a contract with somebody (i.e. the registrar), who operates the database on behave of the reseller

      Fine. Again, good luck in have this implemented in policy and reality.