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[Expanded Text Section addressing the 5 requirements]

 

Requirement

Pen Holder(s)

Support and enhance the multistakeholder model;

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Maintain the security, stability, and resiliency of the Internet DNS; 

 Meet the needs and expectation of the global customers and partners of the IANA functions;

 

 Maintain the openness of the Internet;

 
Does not replace the NTIA role with a government-led or an inter-governmental organization solution. 



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    The transition proposal supports and enhances the multistakeholder model by [in as much as it... ...] is inclusive of and open to ... ... ... ... 

 

 

 

 

 

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2. The  The maintenance (and enhancement) of the security, stability, and resiliency of the Internet DNS, is of course paramount to ... ... ... ...  and the proposal does this by ... ... ... ... ... ... 




 

 

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 3. The  The needs and expectation of the global customers and partners of the IANA functions have been surveyed / established  .. ... ... ...  and the proposed model seeks to ensure they are met by  ... ... ... .. 

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4. The openness of the Internet, is maintained in the proposed model by ensuring that ... .... .... .... ...

 




 

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5. Whilst the importance of having Government [expand to make note on Govs as ccTLD Operators?] effectively engaged as stakeholders within the [ insert specifics and or details] of/in the proposed model, it demonstrably does not replace the NTIA role with a government-led or an inter-governmental organization solution, by .... .... ..... ...... ......