Gisella Gruber-White:Welcome to the ROP Drafting Teams Pen Holders call on THursday 28 February 2013 at 2000 UTC
Gisella Gruber-White:Agenda: https://community.icann.org/x/a4BQAg
Alan Greenberg:what is adogo code for this meeting?
Julia Charvolen:3535
Alan Greenberg:Thx
Natalia Enciso:Hello!
Yrjö Länsipuro:Hello
Alan Greenberg:Hello Natalia
Maureen Hilyard:Hi everyone.. on a little island.. so connection may be intermittent.. but can hear loud and clear
Silvia Vivanco:I will be taking the Action Items today
Julia Charvolen:Salanieta Tamanikaiwaimaro joined the call
Natalia Enciso:Can you please speak louder? Thanks
Heidi Ullrich:Silvia, please take a note of that
Heidi Ullrich:AI for me ;)
Natalia Enciso:3.6 is missing space after he/she deems
Maureen Hilyard:I'm missing big chunks of conversation sorry.. Might not be very helpful in this meeting...
Alan Greenberg:Thanks Natalia
Olivier Crepin-Leblond:Thankfully I have not had the luck to need such action to take place
Holly Raiche:I have just been cut off - could someone call me back
Silvia Vivanco:Adigo is calling you Holly
Heidi Ullrich:Welcome Sala. I note you have sent several comments via email
Heidi Ullrich:Do you wish to note these in the chat?
Salanieta Tamanikaiwaimaro:Hi Heidi, I am here briefly before I head out to say I was on the call earlier and will post my comments here: Brief comments on the document: There needs to be consistency in the drafting language, that is the use of "must" and "will", "shall". We need to choose which one we prefer and stick with that. Consistency in the use of titles or subheaders. As some subordinate clauses have titles and some do not. Removal of erroneous hyperlink references.
Salanieta Tamanikaiwaimaro:I will go through the document sent this morning later and send comments through but those are submitted for now.
Salanieta Tamanikaiwaimaro:Apologies once again.
Natalia Enciso:Sorry the AC got disconnected for 2 minutes. Back now.
Yaovi Atohoun:I am disconnected
Natalia Enciso:in which point are you now?
Heidi Ullrich:Alan, Silvia/Julia will stay on this call. I will switch to the RALO/RG call
Yaovi Atohoun:I am back. Thanks
Yaovi Atohoun:Please Alan could you repeat what Cheryl said please
Yrjö Länsipuro:Heidi, can you switch me too or do you dial out to me again
Maureen Hilyard:Completely understandable and understood, Cheryl..
Julia Charvolen:Operator is dialing out to you
Yrjö Länsipuro:ok
Yaovi Atohoun:bye
Maureen Hilyard:thanks
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