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  • Yes they do, however some consideration should be given to the following:
  • The section detailing the "Delegation Request Form" on pages 7 & 8 of the documentation 'IANA TLD MODIFICATION TEMPLATE 2010-02-17'. could be better as a linked appendix rather than in the body of the text.
  • The section detailing the "Prohibited Networks" on pages 10, 11 & 12 of the documentation, could also be better as a linked appendix rather than in the body of the text.
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  • Yes additional information and some that is in alternate formates would be most useful.  Shorter and searchable KB's and FAQ's as well as other companion tools such as links to video introduction to topic (perhaps a Q&A style)  and presentation materials  would be also appreciated...

Other Comments: Including any drafting and grammar/text modification suggestions.

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