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The below comments are excerpted from the indicated three e-mails:
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*From:* Evan Leibovitch \[evanleibovitch@gmail.com\]
*Sent:* Saturday, February 12, 2011 4:10 PM
*To:* Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond
*Cc:* Seth Greene; langdonorr@gmail.com; yrjo_lansipuro@hotmail.com; Samantha Eisner; ICANN At-Large Staff
*Subject:* Re: Submission of WT A's proposed ICANN Bylaw revisions to ALAC Chair & ALAC |
+1
Nice catch.
- Evan
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From: yrjo_lansipuro@hotmail.com
To: ocl@gih.com; seth.greene@icann.org
CC: langdonorr@gmail.com; evanleibovitch@gmail.com; samantha.eisner@icann.org; staff@atlarge.icann.org
Subject: RE: Submission of WT A's proposed ICANN Bylaw revisions to ALAC Chair & ALAC
Date: Sat, 12 Feb 2011 19:09:38 +0200
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I have no problem with replacing "work" with \["activity"\], as suggested by Olivier. |
Best,
Yrjö
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*From:* Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond \[ocl@gih.com\]
*Sent:* Saturday, February 12, 2011 10:03 AM
*To:* Seth Greene
*Cc:* langdonorr@gmail.com; Evan Leibovitch; yrjo_lansipuro@hotmail.com; Samantha Eisner; ICANN At-Large Staff
*Subject:* Re: Submission of WT A's proposed ICANN Bylaw revisions to ALAC Chair & ALAC |
I suggest replacing:
"The ALAC considers and provides advice on all aspects of work within ICANN"
with
"The ALAC considers and provides advice on all aspects of activity within ICANN"
My reason for this suggestion is that the ALAC is also able to provide advice on matters not directly tagged as work, such as, but not limited to the location of a meeting, personnel changes, opening/closing of ICANN offices, etc.
The text it replaces used to mention: "provide advice on the activities of ICANN" and this was wide-ranging.
I am aware that the rest of the "new" sentence is: "as well as the many other issues for which community input and advice is sought." and I gather that this was included to expand the first part which restricted its input to "work". However, this also constrains the ALAC's mission.
The ALAC is able to comment on issues for which community input and advice is *NOT* sought too.
Kind regards,
Olivier
