| Comment Close Date | Statement Name | Status | Assignee(s) | Call for Comments Open | Call for Comments Close | Vote Announcement | Vote Open | Vote Reminder | Vote Close | Date of Submission | Staff Contact and Email | Statement Number |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| N/A | ATLAS II Declaration | ENDORSED | Multiple | 26.06.2014 | 26.06.2014 10:00 UTC | n/a | ALAC & Regional Leadership Wrap-Up Meeting | n/a | ALAC & Regional Leadership Wrap-Up Meeting | 26.06.2014 | Steve Crocker steve@shinkuro.com | AL-ATLAS-02-DCL-01-01-EN |
FINAL VERSION
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FIRST DRAFT SUBMITTED
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3 Comments
Holly Raiche
In the test on the future of multi stakeholders - Observations Number 5 - why is the reference to 'within richer nations'. I'd delete because I think the concern is for disadvantaged groups both within and outside of richer nations
Tijani Ben Jemaa
Recommendations
1. Current policy management processes within ICANN are insufficient. ICANN must
implement a workable Policy Management Process System, available for use across the
SO/ACs, in order to:
○ enhance Knowledge Management,
○ improve the effectiveness of all ICANN volunteer communities,
○ improve crosscommunity policyspecific activity,
○ enhance
dpolicy development metrics,○ facilitate multilingual engagement,
○ create a taxonomy of policy categories,
○ provide policy development history as an aside for newcomers.
Fourth point: should be a verb as all the other points, so "enhence" and not "enhenced"
Dev Anand Teelucksingh
for #4 under "ICANN Transparency and Accountability"
Original text : "4. There must be a Standing Oversight Body, to hold the ICANN Board responsible for its action or in-action."
Proposed replacement text by JJS as a starting point:
4. To consolidate ICANN's culture of Transparency and Accountability, as called for in the recommendations of ATRT2, oversight of the Board's decisions now requires an effective mechanism capable of providing a multi-stakeholder oversight.