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ATLAS II Declaration

ENDORSEDMultiple26.06.201426.06.2014 10:00 UTCn/aALAC & Regional Leadership Wrap-Up Meetingn/aALAC & Regional Leadership Wrap-Up Meeting26.06.2014
Steve Crocker steve@shinkuro.com

AL-ATLAS-02-DCL-01-01-EN

FINAL VERSION

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FINAL DRAFT VERSION TO BE VOTED UPON BY THE ALAC

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FIRST DRAFT SUBMITTED

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First Draft of the ATLAS II Declaration Appendix Documents

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3 Comments

  1. In the test on the future of multi stakeholders - Observations Number 5 - why is the reference to 'within richer nations'.  I'd delete because I think the concern is for disadvantaged groups both within and outside of richer nations

  2. Recommendations 
     
    1. Current  policy  management  processes  within  ICANN  are  insufficient.  ICANN  must 
    implement a workable Policy Management Process System, available for use across the 
    SO/ACs, in order to: 
    ○ enhance Knowledge Management, 
    ○ improve the effectiveness of all ICANN volunteer communities, 
    ○ improve cross­community policy­specific activity, 
    ○ enhanced policy development metrics, 
    ○ facilitate multilingual engagement, 
    ○ create a taxonomy of policy categories, 
    ○ provide policy development history as an aside for newcomers. 

     

    Fourth point: should be a verb as all the other points, so "enhence" and not "enhenced"

  3. for #4 under "ICANN Transparency and Accountability" 

    Original text : "4. There must be a Standing Oversight Body, to hold the ICANN Board responsible for its action or in-action."

    Proposed replacement text by JJS as a starting point: 

    4. To consolidate ICANN's culture of Transparency and Accountability, as called for in the recommendations of ATRT2, oversight of the Board's decisions now requires an effective mechanism capable of providing a multi-stakeholder oversight.